The Couch Potato’s Visitor

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"I was house-sitting for my aunt in her old Victorian apartment, a place I’d always found charmingly creepy with its creaky floorboards and drafty windows. It was a Tuesday night, and I was alone, as usual. My aunt was on a cruise in the Mediterranean, and I was enjoying the solitude, sprawled on her plush […]"

I was house-sitting for my aunt in her old Victorian apartment, a place I’d always found charmingly creepy with its creaky floorboards and drafty windows. It was a Tuesday night, and I was alone, as usual. My aunt was on a cruise in the Mediterranean, and I was enjoying the solitude, sprawled on her plush velvet couch with a bag of chips and a forgotten reality show on the TV. The apartment had a peculiar history—my aunt had told me stories of a previous tenant who’d died there, a lonely old man who collected porcelain dolls. I’d always felt a prickle of unease in the back bedroom, where his collection still sat on dusty shelves, but I’d never seen anything concrete. That night, though, the air felt different, charged with a static that made the hairs on my arms stand up.

I got up to grab my phone from the bedroom, leaving the TV droning on about some celebrity drama. As I rummaged through my bag on the bed, I heard it: a low, throaty chuckle, unmistakably human, coming from the direction of the living room. My first instinct was that the TV had some weird audio, but the laugh was too distinct, too close. I froze, listening. The only sound was the muffled TV dialogue. I shrugged it off, grabbed my phone, and walked back.

As I sank into the couch, the chuckle came again, right behind my ear, as if someone was breathing down my neck. I whipped around, but there was nothing except the empty room. The TV was on an ad break—silence except for the faint hum of the refrigerator. My heart started to pound. I knew about ghosts; I’d had encounters before, but this felt different. This wasn’t a passive presence; this was a targeted, almost playful mockery.

I turned off the TV completely, and the room fell into a heavy silence. The only light came from a streetlamp outside, casting long shadows across the floor. I sat there, my eyes scanning the dark corners, waiting. The chuckle returned, clearer this time, and I spun around so fast I nearly fell off the couch. There, in the corner of the room, was a figure. It was a young boy, no older than seven, with pale skin and wide, dark eyes that seemed to absorb all light. He was wearing an old-fashioned sailor suit, the kind from a century ago, and he was staring at me with an unsettling grin.

I blinked, and he vanished. But then I heard a soft pattering of small feet, as if he was running along the baseboards, circling me. I felt a cold draft sweep through the room, and the porcelain dolls in the bedroom began to rattle, their tiny eyes reflecting the dim light. The boy appeared again, this time closer, sitting on the armrest of the couch, his feet dangling. He tilted his head and let out that same deep chuckle, which from a child’s face was grotesque. I tried to speak, to ask who he was, but my voice was locked in my throat.

He pointed a small finger at me, then at the hallway leading to the bedroom. I knew he wanted me to follow. I had heard stories from my aunt about the previous tenant’s grandson, a boy who had drowned in the bathtub in the 1920s. She said the boy’s spirit lingered, playing pranks, but she always dismissed it as old wives’ tales. Now, I realized it was true. But why was he here, and why did he want me to go to the bedroom?

Against my better judgment, I rose from the couch, my legs feeling like lead. The boy hopped off the armrest and floated down the hallway, pausing to look back at me. I followed, my heart hammering. The bedroom door was ajar, and I could hear the faint sound of dripping water. I pushed it open, and there, in the eerie glow of the streetlamp, I saw the bathtub filled to the brim with water, rippling as if something had just been submerged. The boy stood beside it, his grin widening, and then he pointed at the water.

I looked into the tub, and my reflection was not my own. It was the face of a drowned child, bloated and pale, with eyes like dark pits. I stumbled back, and the boy’s chuckle echoed around me, multiplying, until it seemed to come from everywhere. The water splashed over the sides, soaking the floor, and I felt a cold hand grip my ankle, pulling me toward the tub. I screamed, but no sound came out. The grip tightened, and I was dragged across the wet floor, my fingers clawing at the carpet.

Just as my face was about to plunge into the water, I woke up with a start, on the couch, the TV still playing. The chips bag was on the floor, and my phone was in my hand. I was drenched in sweat, my heart racing. I told myself it was just a nightmare, a vivid one, but then I heard it again—that same deep chuckle, now coming from behind me. I turned around, and the boy was sitting on the armrest, his grin even wider, water dripping from his hair. He pointed to the TV, which was showing a static-filled channel, and then I saw my aunt’s reflection standing behind me in the glass, her face pale and hollow, with the same dark eyes as the boy. I realized then that I was not awake, and I might never be again.

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