The Concrete Hollow

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Story Premise 4 min read (624 words)

"The night air was brittle with frost, and the streetlights cast long, oily pools on the cracked pavement. I was buckling my youngest, Theo, into his car seat after a long day of errands, while my neighbor, Mira, wrestled with her own daughter’s tangled straps. The parking lot behind the old strip mall was nearly […]"

The night air was brittle with frost, and the streetlights cast long, oily pools on the cracked pavement. I was buckling my youngest, Theo, into his car seat after a long day of errands, while my neighbor, Mira, wrestled with her own daughter’s tangled straps. The parking lot behind the old strip mall was nearly empty, just a few cars huddled under the sickly glow. The alley behind us was a narrow slit between the brick wall of the closed bakery and the chain-link fence of the storage yard. It was the kind of place you don’t look into, especially after dark.

Theo, who was barely a year old and usually all squirms and giggles, had gone quiet. I felt his small chest press against mine as I lifted him, his face turned away from the alley. Then, without warning, he burst into a fit of laughter, his tiny hands clapping together. I turned, my heart doing a little skip, half expecting to see a stray cat or a wandering dog. But the alley was empty, a black mouth swallowing the shadows.

Theo started babbling in that excited, urgent way of his, waving his chubby hand in a ‘hello’ gesture, then reaching out with both arms as if pleading to be picked up. His eyes were fixed on a spot near the dumpster, a place where the darkness seemed to thicken, to breathe.

Mira looked over, her brow furrowed. ‘Who’s he talking to?’ she asked, her voice tight.

‘I don’t know,’ I said, forcing a laugh. ‘Probably a spider or something.’ But a cold knot was forming in my stomach. Theo was usually oblivious to insects.

He kept up the one-sided conversation, his gestures becoming more insistent. He pointed, then made a ‘come’ motion with his whole hand, his face bright with joy. The air around us seemed to drop a few degrees, and I could see my breath puffing out in small clouds.

Then Theo said his first clear word. It wasn’t ‘mama’ or ‘dada’. It was a gurgling, almost wet sound: ‘Lila.’

Mira’s face went pale. ‘Did he just say Lila?’ she whispered.

My blood ran cold. Lila was Mira’s daughter, but she was in the car, snug in her seat, not in the alley. I turned to look at the alley again, and for a split second, I thought I saw a shape–a small, hunched figure, maybe the size of a child, standing at the edge of the darkness. But when I blinked, it was gone.

Theo’s laughter died, replaced by a soft, cooing sound. He reached out one last time, then his arm dropped, and he turned to me, his eyes wide and confused, as if the spell had been broken.

We rushed to finish loading the kids and drove home in silence, both of us stealing glances in the rearview mirror as if the alley might follow us.

That was last week. Since then, Theo has changed. He doesn’t laugh much anymore. Instead, he sits in his high chair, staring at the corner of the kitchen, occasionally whispering ‘Lila’ under his breath. I’ve tried to ask him who Lila is, but he just points at the wall.

Yesterday, I found a small, dirty handprint on the inside of our front door, right at child height. But Theo’s hands are clean, and his fingers are smaller. Mira says her daughter has been having nightmares, screaming about ‘the hollow girl’ who stands at the foot of her bed.

I don’t know what’s happening. But I can’t shake the feeling that when Theo waved into that alley, he wasn’t saying hello. He was answering a call. And whatever answered is now waiting for him to come back.

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