The Coat Rack in Room 4

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"I was fourteen when I spent the night at my friend Mira’s aunt’s bungalow in the hill station of Kodaikanal. It was February, and the town was shrouded in a cold mist that never quite lifted. My parents had sent me there to escape the heat of Chennai, and Mira’s family had kindly offered to […]"

I was fourteen when I spent the night at my friend Mira’s aunt’s bungalow in the hill station of Kodaikanal. It was February, and the town was shrouded in a cold mist that never quite lifted. My parents had sent me there to escape the heat of Chennai, and Mira’s family had kindly offered to host me for a week. The bungalow was old, built during the British era, with creaking wooden floors and long, drape-heavy corridors. That particular night, Mira’s parents and her aunt had gone to a late dinner at a friend’s house, leaving us alone with her five-year-old brother, Arjun.

We were in the living room, setting up Mira’s laptop to watch a movie, when I realized I needed to use the bathroom. It was at the far end of the house, past a series of rooms that were rarely used. I walked down that gloomy hallway, the only light coming from the living room behind me, casting long shadows. I finished quickly and started back, my footsteps muffled by the worn carpet. As I passed a half-open door to a guest bedroom, I caught a glimpse of a tall, dark figure standing just inside, so still it might have been a coat rack. But it wasn’t a coat rack. It was the shape of a man, too tall, too thin, with no discernible features. My heart lurched. ‘Mira?’ I called, but the figure did not move. I blinked, and it was gone. The room was empty. I convinced myself it was my imagination, a trick of the dim light.

Hours later, after Mira’s parents returned, we were sitting on her bed, talking in hushed tones. Mira confided that the previous night she had seen a similar figure – what she described as a tall, shadowy man – walking past her bedroom door. She hadn’t slept since. I felt a chill run down my spine. Arjun, who was playing with his toy cars on the floor, suddenly looked up and said, ‘The man in the coat room is watching us.’ We both froze. ‘What man, Arjun?’ Mira asked, trying to keep her voice steady. He pointed to the door. ‘The one who stands behind the door. He’s always there. But he only comes out when you’re alone.’

We decided to investigate. Armed with a flashlight, we crept back to that guest bedroom. The door was still ajar. I pushed it open. The room was cluttered with old furniture, but in the corner stood a tall, antique coat rack, draped with a long black coat that swayed slightly as if someone had just brushed past it. Mira let out a shaky laugh. ‘See? It’s just a coat rack. Arjun must have seen that.’ But as we turned to leave, I noticed something on the floor – a fresh, wet footprint, too large for any of us, leading from the window to the coat rack and then disappearing. The window was closed, latched from the inside. I looked at the coat rack again. The coat was now hanging straight, as if it had been carefully smoothed. I could swear it hadn’t been disturbed a second ago.

That night, we didn’t sleep. Every creak and groan of the old house sent us into a panic. Around 2 AM, I heard a soft rustling from the guest bedroom. I grabbed Mira’s hand, and we crept to the door. Through the crack, we saw the coat rack, but it was no longer just a coat rack. The black coat was now spread wide, like arms outstretched, and it was swaying gently, back and forth. A low humming filled the room, a sound like a distant funeral march. Arjun appeared behind us, rubbing his eyes. ‘He’s dancing,’ he whispered. ‘He dances when he’s happy. And he’s happy because you’re scared.’

We slammed the door shut and ran to the living room, where the adults were still chatting. They looked at our pale faces and asked what was wrong. We stammered about noise and shadows, but they simply dismissed it as the wind or old pipes. But we knew better. The next morning, I woke up to find a small, black button on my pillow. It was from the coat. Mira found a piece of paper under her door, with a single word written in an old-fashioned script: ‘Stay.’ We left that day, and I never returned. I still dream of that coat rack, of how it swayed without any wind, and how, in the last glimpse I had of it, the coat was empty, yet the shadow beneath it was not.

Years later, I learned that the bungalow had been the site of a tragic event in the 1940s. A groundskeeper had been found dead in that very room, hanged from the coat rack. They never found his shadow, they said, because it had been stolen. And in the cold, foggy nights of Kodaikanal, some say you can still see a tall figure standing inside the guest bedroom, waiting for someone to be alone with it.

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