The Cinder-Watch Pact

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"When I was fourteen, my family moved to a sprawling, decaying Victorian house on the edge of a town that had long since given up on itself. My parents, in their infinite wisdom, decided I should have my own room, a former servant’s quarters on the third floor, a space that still smelled of mothballs […]"

When I was fourteen, my family moved to a sprawling, decaying Victorian house on the edge of a town that had long since given up on itself. My parents, in their infinite wisdom, decided I should have my own room, a former servant’s quarters on the third floor, a space that still smelled of mothballs and old dust. I had shared a cramped room with my twin brother and my younger sister for my entire life, so the sudden, echoing solitude felt like a punishment. The room was narrow, with a single window that looked out onto a gnarled, black-barked tree, its branches scratching the glass like skeletal fingers. The walls were papered with a pattern of faded, sickly yellow roses, and a heavy, mahogany armoire stood against one wall, its doors slightly ajar as if it had been left in a hurry.

I hated that room. It was too quiet, and the silence was thick, almost suffocating. To combat the loneliness, I began a ritual. Every night, after the house had settled into its creaks and sighs, I would sit on the floor in the middle of the room and talk to the air. I would tell it about my day, my frustrations with my brother, the stupid crush on a boy in my science class, my hopeless dream of becoming an artist. I knew I was talking to nothing, but the act of shaping words into the darkness made the solitude easier to bear. I called it ‘talking to the night’, and it became as necessary as breathing.

But the room seemed to respond in its own way. The most unnerving thing was the armoire. Every night, without fail, its doors would swing open. No matter how firmly I closed them, I would wake in the small hours to find them yawning wide, revealing the dark, empty cavern within. My father, ever practical, blamed a draft, but I knew better. There was no draft in that sealed tomb of a room. I started to fear the armoire, and by extension, all open doors. I would wedge a chair against the doors before I slept, but it would still happen, the chair knocked aside as if by an invisible hand.

One night, I was particularly agitated. I had been talking to the air about a fight I’d had with my best friend, and I felt a fool. The silence that followed felt heavier than usual, and a strange thought crossed my mind: I had been talking to this ‘presence’ for weeks, but I had never offered it a seat. It was a ridiculous idea, but in the middle of the night, with the house groaning and the armoire door creaking open, rationality seemed like a distant luxury. I said out loud, my voice a little hoarse, ‘If you’re tired, you can sit down.’ And I gestured vaguely to the edge of my bed.

The moment those words left my mouth, the room changed. The air grew colder, and the shadows in the corners seemed to deepen. The armoire door, which had been half-open, swung fully open with a sharp, deliberate click. And from the darkness inside, something stepped out. It wasn’t a ghost or a monster; it was a shape, a silhouette that barely registered as human. It was tall and thin, with long limbs that seemed to move in a way that was not quite natural, and it had no face. Just a surface of darkness where a face should be.

I froze, my heart pounding against my ribs. The figure stood in the opening, as if waiting for an invitation. My breath caught in my throat, and I was too terrified to speak. The figure took a step forward, then another, and it walked to the edge of my bed. It sat down. The mattress didn’t even dip. It just sat there, a silent, faceless presence, and I could feel it watching me, even though it had no eyes.

We stayed like that for what felt like an eternity, me staring at it, it sitting at my bedside. Then, it slowly raised one hand, and pointed a long, thin finger towards the base of the bed. I followed its gesture and saw something glinting on the floor: a small, round object that hadn’t been there before. It was a pocket watch, made of tarnished silver, its face cracked and the hands missing. I reached out, tentatively, and picked it up. The watch was cold and heavy in my hand. When I looked up, the figure was gone. The armoire door was closed. The room was quiet again, save for my ragged breathing.

The next day, I told no one about the incident. I was too shaken, and I couldn’t explain it. But the watch remained, and I hid it away in a drawer. I kept up my nightly talks, but now I was more cautious. I didn’t invite anything. And the armoire doors still opened every night, but I never saw the figure again.

Weeks passed, and the watch began to feel like a secret talisman. I would take it out at night and hold it, wondering about its origin. Then, one night, as I held it, I noticed a faint ticking sound. It was so faint I thought I was imagining it, but it grew louder. I held the watch to my ear, and I heard a voice, a whisper that seemed to come from inside the watch, saying, ‘You let me rest. Now I owe you a favor.’ I was so startled I dropped it, and the ticking stopped.

I didn’t sleep that night, and in the morning, I noticed the watch had changed. The crack in the face was gone, and it gleamed as if freshly polished. It was then that I realized I had made a pact. I had given the thing that lived in the armoire a place to rest, and in return, it was bound to me. But what did that mean? What would it ask of me? What would I have to sacrifice? The question haunted me, and the weight of the watch in my pocket felt heavier than lead.

From that night on, the house felt different. Doors that I closed would fly open on their own, not just in my room, but throughout the house. My mother commented on the draft. My brother joked about the ghost. But I knew it was the figure, watching, waiting. And the watch, my cinder-watch, as I started to call it, would tick softly in my ear, a constant reminder of the darkness I had welcomed.

I still talk to the air, but now I know something else is listening. And every night, when the armoire doors creak open, I look into that empty darkness and wonder when it will come to collect its due.

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