The Cinder Man

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"The first time I saw him, I was nine, standing at the kitchen sink of our new house, a fixer-upper my parents had bought on the edge of a town that seemed to be slowly being swallowed by the forest. The house was old, with creaking floorboards and a cellar that smelled of wet earth, […]"

The first time I saw him, I was nine, standing at the kitchen sink of our new house, a fixer-upper my parents had bought on the edge of a town that seemed to be slowly being swallowed by the forest. The house was old, with creaking floorboards and a cellar that smelled of wet earth, but it was ours.

It was late October, and the days were getting shorter, the light turning a sickly yellow. I was washing dishes, the water lukewarm and gray, when I caught a reflection in the windowpane. A man stood behind me, tall and thin, with a face that was all sharp angles, and eyes that seemed to have no whites, just two dark pools. He was wearing a long coat, covered in a fine gray dust, and his hands were black, as if he’d been handling coal. I spun around, but the kitchen was empty. The curtains fluttered as if a breeze had passed, but the window was shut.

I told my parents, but they dismissed it as a trick of the light, an overactive imagination. We had just moved, after all. But I knew what I saw. I started seeing him more often, always in my peripheral vision: a shadow in the hallway, a silhouette in the greenhouse that had been abandoned in the backyard, a figure standing at the end of the garden at dusk, just a shape against the dark line of the trees. He never moved, never spoke, but he was always there, watching.

When I was thirteen, I discovered the cellar door beneath the stairs. It had been painted over many times, but I managed to pry it open. The steps led down into a darkness that smelled of damp and ash. At the bottom, I found a room. It was empty, save for a single wooden chair in the center. On the seat was a small brass key, tarnished and cold. As I reached for it, I felt a breath on the back of my neck, and I fled, slamming the door behind me.

I didn’t go back down there for years. I grew up, went to college, moved away. But I always carried that key, a reminder of the thing in my house. Then, my father passed, and I inherited the property. I returned, hoping to sell it, but the moment I stepped inside, the dust on the floor was disturbed, as if someone had recently walked through. The furniture was exactly as I remembered, but there was a new layer of grime, and the air was thick with the smell of smoke and earth.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay in my old bed, the one I’d had as a teenager, and listened to the house settle. Then I heard it: a faint scraping, coming from the cellar. I got up, my heart pounding, and opened the cellar door. The stairs were darker than I recalled, the walls seemed to close in. At the bottom, the room was the same, but now there was a small stove against the far wall, its door hanging open. Inside, there were ashes, still warm. And on the chair, there was a letter.

I picked it up. The envelope was blank, but the seal was a dark, waxy red, like dried blood. I broke it open, and inside was a single sheet of paper, yellowed with age. The handwriting was cramped and spidery, barely legible. It read: ‘He has been waiting for you. He is the keeper of the ashes. He will take your place when the time comes.’ I didn’t understand. I looked around the room, and there was a mirror on the wall that I hadn’t noticed before, its glass black. In it, I saw a reflection of myself, but behind me, just over my shoulder, was the man. He was closer now, so close I could see the cracks in his gray skin, the tiny embers glowing in his eye sockets. He reached out a hand, his fingers charred and crumbling, and touched the glass.

The next morning, I called a real estate agent. But when I tried to leave, my car wouldn’t start. The engine was dead, the battery drained. My phone had no service, and the landline was cut. I was trapped. I walked into town, but the streets were empty, and the people I saw from afar stared at me with vacant eyes, as if they were seeing something else. I went to the local café, but the barista had coal dust on her hands, and she kept licking her lips over and over, as if tasting something. Finally, I found an old man sitting on a bench in the park. He looked at me with pity. ‘You’ll have to give him something,’ he said. ‘The house always takes its due.’

I returned to the house, determined to face him. I went down to the cellar, and the stove was lit, flames casting dancing shadows. The man was standing by it, his back to me. I spoke. ‘What do you want?’ He turned slowly. His mouth opened, but no sound came out. Instead, he pointed to the chair. On it was not a letter, but a photograph. It was a picture of me as a child, standing in front of the house, a wide smile on my face. Next to me, I could see a faint shadow, a tall figure with arms outstretched.

I understood then. He was not a ghost; he was a guardian, or a curse, bound to the house. And he needed a successor. I had to find someone else, or I would be trapped here, becoming him, a creature of ash and soot, waiting for the next soul.

I spent the next days scouring the town for anyone desperate enough to take the burden. I even considered burning the house down, but something always stopped me, some invisible force that made me drop the match. Then, one night, I heard the scraping again, louder, more insistent. I went down, and the cellar was filled with a thick smoke. The man was standing in the middle, and he pointed to the stove. Inside, the fire was dying, and I saw bones—human bones—among the coals.

I ran out of the house, into the cold night air, and collapsed on the lawn. When I woke, the sun was rising, and I was lying on a patch of grass that was burnt to a crisp. I got up, brushed myself off, and walked to the edge of the property. I didn’t look back. I made it to the highway and hitched a ride out of town. But as the miles grew, I realized that the key was still in my pocket, and I could still feel the warmth of the stove on my skin.

I now live in a city, far from any forest, in an apartment with no cellar. But sometimes, when I close my eyes, I see him. And in my dreams, I am standing in that kitchen, and he is behind me, and his hand is on my shoulder, and he is pulling me back towards the house, towards the stove, towards the waiting dark.

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