The Cider Incident at Thornfield House

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"I never believed in the old house’s reputation. Thornfield House had stood on the edge of our small town for over a century, its Victorian bones creaking under layers of neglect. My parents had inherited it from a distant uncle, and we’d moved in six months ago. My friend, Lena, was the only one brave […]"

I never believed in the old house’s reputation. Thornfield House had stood on the edge of our small town for over a century, its Victorian bones creaking under layers of neglect. My parents had inherited it from a distant uncle, and we’d moved in six months ago. My friend, Lena, was the only one brave enough to visit, and that afternoon we were supposed to meet friends at the reservoir.

I was upstairs, changing out of my work clothes, when I called down to Lena in the kitchen, offering her a can of cider from the fridge. I heard the hiss of the can opening, then a thunderous BANG that rattled the floorboards. I ran down the stairs, my heart hammering, and found Lena standing in a pool of amber liquid, her eyes wide. She was clutching the now-empty can, her hands shaking.

‘It just exploded,’ she said, her voice trembling. ‘I didn’t even touch it! It was like something smacked it out of my hand.’ I laughed nervously, thinking she’d fumbled it. I grabbed a roll of paper towels from the pantry, and we both knelt to clean up the sticky mess. The smell of apple and alcohol filled the air.

As we worked, I couldn’t shake the feeling that we were being watched. The kitchen windows faced the overgrown backyard, and the setting sun cast long shadows through the dusty glass. I’d always felt a chill in this house, but it was stronger now. I dismissed it as nerves.

Once the floor was dry, we tossed the soaked paper towels into the bin. Lena bent down to pick up the discarded can, intending to throw it away, but as she straightened, a violent force wrenched it from her grasp. It flew across the room and crashed against the wall, denting the plaster. We both froze, staring at the can as it rolled to a stop.

My blood turned to ice. There was no rational explanation. Lena’s face was pale, her eyes glistening with fear. ‘I swear to God, I didn’t do that,’ she whispered. I believed her.

We stood in silence, the only sound our ragged breathing. Then I noticed the air had grown cold, and a faint, sickly sweet odor rose from the floor—not just the cider, but something else, like rotting fruit. A soft creak came from the hallway, as if someone was stepping on the loose floorboard just outside the kitchen door.

We grabbed our coats and bolted. We never made it to the reservoir. We drove to Lena’s house and sat in her car, watching the sun dip below the horizon, talking in hushed tones about what we’d seen. I tried to rationalize it: a draft, a trick of the light, a sudden seizure. But deep down, I knew.

That night, I lay in my bed, unable to sleep. The house was silent, but I felt a presence in the dark. At 3 AM, I heard a crash from the kitchen. I crept downstairs, my heart pounding. There, on the kitchen floor, lay another can of cider, its contents splattered across the tiles, as if it had been flung from the pantry shelf. The smell of fermented apples was overwhelming.

I backed away, and as I did, I noticed something on the wall above the stove: a cluster of small, dark stains. In the dim light, they looked like letters. I squinted, and my blood ran cold. The stains spelled out a single word: ‘LEAVE.’

I didn’t wait. I grabbed my car keys and drove to the nearest motel, never looking back. I called my parents from the road, telling them I couldn’t stay there alone. They didn’t understand, but I didn’t care. As I drove, the night closing in, I saw in my rearview mirror the silhouette of a figure standing in the upstairs window of Thornfield House—a figure that was definitely not my reflection.

I never stepped foot in that house again. A month later, my parents sold it to a developer who planned to demolish it. I heard that during the demolition, workers found a hidden cellar beneath the kitchen, filled with old cider bottles and the mummified remains of a man who had apparently been walled up decades ago. The police said it was likely a former owner, driven mad by loneliness. But I know the truth: this house didn’t want us to stay, and it made sure we knew.

To this day, the smell of apple cider makes my skin crawl. And sometimes, late at night, I swear I can hear a faint crashing sound, as if something is being thrown against a wall, followed by the whispers of a voice that says, ‘You should have left sooner.’

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