The Ceiling Fan’s Second Cog

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"Three months after we moved into the old farmhouse, the nights began to feel different. The house itself was a relic, its bones creaking with every gust of wind, and the air inside always smelled of damp wood and forgotten things. I shared a room with my cousin, Derek, who was a year younger and […]"

Three months after we moved into the old farmhouse, the nights began to feel different. The house itself was a relic, its bones creaking with every gust of wind, and the air inside always smelled of damp wood and forgotten things. I shared a room with my cousin, Derek, who was a year younger and prone to vivid nightmares. We had a set of bunk beds that my father had built, with Derek on top and me below, the metal frame groaning under his weight whenever he shifted.

It was a Tuesday, I think, when the first incident occurred. I had been reading by the dim light of a flashlight, the bulb flickering as if it too were tired. Derek had been asleep for hours, his breathing steady and deep. The only sound was the occasional rustle of leaves outside and the steady tick of the grandfather clock in the hall. Then, a sound cut through the silence. A low, guttural moan, like something heavy being dragged across a floor. I thought he was dreaming, so I ignored it and turned a page. But it happened again, louder, more insistent. I put down my book and listened. The moans came in waves, each one more strained than the last, and I could hear the frantic rustling of sheets above me.

Irritated, I hissed up at him, ‘Derek, shut up! You’re having a nightmare.’ The moaning stopped abruptly, replaced by a strangled gasp. Then, a voice, thin and trembling, came from above. ‘Help me.’ My blood went cold. ‘What did you say?’ I asked, my voice steady but my heart pounding. ‘Something was here,’ Derek whispered, his voice cracking. ‘It was pressing down on my chest. I couldn’t move, couldn’t speak. I tried to scream, but only those sounds came out. It felt like it was sitting on me.’

I switched on the bedside lamp, casting a weak yellow glow across the room. Derek’s face appeared over the edge of the bunk, pale and slick with sweat. His eyes were wide, and he looked like he had aged ten years. ‘It was just sleep paralysis,’ I said, trying to convince myself as much as him. ‘You were half awake, your brain was still dreaming.’ Derek shook his head violently. ‘No, I saw it. It was a shape, all dark and twisted, and it had these long fingers that pressed into my throat. It was real.’ I felt a chill run down my spine, but I forced a laugh. ‘You’re just freaked out by the old house. Come down and have some water.’

Derek climbed down, his feet hitting the floor with a thud. We went to the kitchen, and I poured us both glasses of water from the tap. The water tasted metallic, like rust. We sat at the table in silence, listening to the house settle. After a while, Derek said, ‘I don’t want to go back up there.’ I didn’t either, but I didn’t want to admit it. We ended up sleeping on the couch in the living room, the television on low to drown out the silence.

The next day, we tried to laugh it off as a bad dream. But the following week, it happened again. This time, I was already awake, unable to sleep. I was lying in my bunk, staring at the underside of Derek’s mattress, when I heard the distinct sound of something moving above. It was a heavy, dragging sound, like a body being pulled across the floor. Then, a low, wet breathing, right above my head. I froze, my heart hammering in my chest. I could feel the air move, as if something was descending from the top bunk. I wanted to call out to Derek, but my voice stuck in my throat. The breathing grew louder, closer, until I felt a cold pressure on my chest, like a hand. I tried to move, to scream, but my limbs were locked. I could only lie there, paralyzed, as the pressure increased, making it hard to breathe.

Then, just as suddenly as it started, the pressure lifted, and the breathing faded. I gasped, sucking in air, and scrambled to sit up. I fumbled for the lamp and switched it on. Derek was sitting up in his bunk, his eyes wide and terrified. ‘You felt it too, didn’t you?’ he whispered. I nodded, my hands shaking. ‘We have to tell someone,’ I said. ‘We have to get out of this house.’

We told my parents the next morning, but they dismissed it as an overactive imagination and a drafty old house. My dad said, ‘You boys are just getting spooked by the wind and the creaking. Nothing to worry about.’ But we knew better. We started sleeping with the lights on, and we took to wearing crucifixes and hanging garlic over our beds, even though we weren’t particularly religious. It didn’t help. The presence grew stronger. We would hear footsteps in the hallway at night, and the door to our room would creak open on its own. We would wake up with scratch marks on our arms, and Derek once found a strand of coarse black hair on his pillow that didn’t belong to anyone in the family.

One night, about a month after the first incident, we were lying in our bunks, wide awake, when the ceiling fan began to hum. It was a old fan, with two blades, and it had never made a sound like that before. It started as a low buzz, then rose to a high-pitched whine. The blades began to spin faster and faster, until they were a blur. Then, with a loud crack, one of the blades snapped off and flew across the room, embedding itself in the wall not far from my head. Derek screamed, and I dove off my bunk, pulling him down with me. We huddled under the desk as the fan continued to spin with the one remaining blade, wobbling violently.

Then, the humming stopped, and the fan stilled. The room was silent. We stayed under the desk for what felt like hours, until the first light of dawn crept through the curtains. When we finally emerged, we saw that the broken blade was lying on the floor, and on it was a pattern of scorch marks, like a handprint, burnt into the wood. We showed it to my parents, and this time, they couldn’t dismiss it. My dad called a priest, but when he arrived, he took one look at the house and refused to enter. He said, ‘There’s something old in there, something that doesn’t like the living. You need to leave.’

We moved out the next week. We left most of our belongings behind. I never looked back. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I still hear that low, guttural moan, and I feel the pressure on my chest, and I wonder if it followed us. And I remember the second cog in the ceiling fan, the one that never spun, but always seemed to be watching. That’s what I call it now, in my mind: the watcher in the fan. I hope you never hear it hum.

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