The Catalog of Unfinished Things

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"My mother, Eleanor, never spoke of the farm. Not the one where I grew up, but the one before, where she spent her childhood. Whenever I asked, her face would close like a shuttered window, and she’d say, ‘We don’t talk about those days, Greta. They’re best left buried.’ But last week, on the eve […]"

My mother, Eleanor, never spoke of the farm. Not the one where I grew up, but the one before, where she spent her childhood. Whenever I asked, her face would close like a shuttered window, and she’d say, ‘We don’t talk about those days, Greta. They’re best left buried.’ But last week, on the eve of my thirtieth birthday, she called me, her voice thin and trembling, asking if I could come home. She said she had something to show me, something she’d kept hidden for too long.

I drove the six hours through the rain, my mind churning with old half-heard stories. When I arrived, the house felt different—smaller, darker, as if the light itself had been drained from it. Eleanor was waiting at the kitchen table, a worn leather-bound book in front of her. She looked older than I remembered, her hands gnarled around a cup of cold tea. ‘I’m so sorry, Greta,’ she whispered, pushing the book toward me. ‘I should have burned it years ago.’

The book was filled with her handwriting, every page a meticulous record. Dates, times, weather conditions, and descriptions of odd occurrences: a bed that creaked when no one was in it, a door that slammed shut on its own, a cold spot in the hallway that never warmed. But as I flipped to the later pages, the entries became more disturbing. ‘The thing in the orchard,’ she had written, ‘it wears the shape of a child, but its eyes are not human.’ And then, in darker ink: ‘It wants to come inside.’

She told me that when she was eight, she and her younger brother, Tomas, used to play in the abandoned apple orchard that bordered their property. The trees were gnarled and tangled, and the locals said the orchard was haunted by the ghost of the old farmer who had hanged himself there after the blight killed his crop. But the ghost they saw wasn’t a man. It was a child, or something that looked like a child, with too-long arms and a smile that didn’t reach its eyes. It would call their names from the trees, and if they got too close, it would vanish, leaving behind a strong smell of rotting apples.

Eleanor and Tomas made a pact to never speak of it to their parents, because the grown-ups would just say it was their imagination. But one summer evening, Tomas didn’t come in for supper. Eleanor found him in the orchard, standing perfectly still, his back to her. When he turned, his eyes were black, like holes bored into his skull, and his mouth was open in a silent scream. ‘He spoke to me, Ellie,’ Tomas said, his voice flat. ‘He showed me all the things that were never finished. The harvest that never came. The rope that never snapped. The children who never grew.’

That night, Tomas fell ill with a fever that burned like the devil. The doctor couldn’t explain it, and within a week, he was gone. The family moved away shortly after, but Eleanor never forgot. She started keeping the book as a way to document the strange things that followed her, convinced that the thing from the orchard had taken root in her mind and was feeding on her memories. She said it came to her in dreams, showing her glimpses of other lives, other unfinished things, and it always asked the same question: ‘Will you help me finish what I started?’

As she finished speaking, the lamp in the kitchen flickered and died. In the sudden darkness, I heard a sound from outside—a slow, rhythmic scraping, like something being dragged through gravel. Eleanor grabbed my arm, her nails digging into my skin. ‘It’s here, Greta. It followed me all these years, and I think it’s come for you now.’ I looked toward the window, and beyond the rain-streaked glass, I saw a shape standing at the edge of the yard. It was too tall, too thin, and its head tilted at an unnatural angle. Even in the dark, I could see its eyes—unblinking, black, and full of hunger.

My mother’s book sat between us, a catalog of her worst fears, and I realized that the thing had been preying on her loneliness, her regret, offering to ‘finish’ the stories that had been left incomplete. It had been feeding on her guilt over Tomas’s death, and now it wanted me. I slammed the book shut, and as the creature took a step closer, I knew there was only one thing to do: I had to burn it. Not just the pages, but the story itself.

I grabbed the book from the table and threw it into the fireplace, where the embers were still glowing. The flames caught, and the pages curled and blackened, and from the fire came a sound like a child’s laugh, high and thin, that faded into nothing. When I turned back to the window, the shape was gone. But I knew it wasn’t over. The thing had been waiting for decades, and it had learned patience. It would find another way, another unfinished life to feed on. And now I was one of the threads in its story, a loose end it intended to snip.

Eleanor looked at me, her eyes wet with tears. ‘I’m sorry,’ she said again. ‘I should have told you sooner. I thought if I kept silent, it would lose interest. But it never does. It always comes back.’ I looked at the ashes in the fireplace, the burned remains of my mother’s private testimony, and I felt a cold dread settle in my stomach. The book had been the only warning, the only map. And I had just destroyed it.

Now, every night, I hear the scraping outside my window. I see the shape standing in the field, waiting. And I know that the thing’s story is not finished with me. It was never about the orchard or the ghost. It was about the appetite that lies at the heart of all unfinished things—the desperate, aching need for an ending, no matter the cost. And I have a feeling that, soon, I’m going to be the one who helps it write its final chapter.

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