The desert highway unspooled into a ribbon of black asphalt, the sun a molten coin sinking into the horizon. Elena, a fresh-faced graduate from Ohio, clutched her purse tighter as the mini-van jostled over a pothole. She was headed to a teaching post in the remote town of Al-Mahra, deep in the southern reaches of the country. The other teachers in the van were a mix of weary veterans and nervous newcomers, all exchanging stories to pass the time. Elena, however, found her attention drawn to a woman in the seat across from her—a gaunt, sallow-faced woman with eyes that seemed too large for her skull. She introduced herself as Ingrid, and there was something about her that made Elena’s skin crawl, though she couldn’t say why.
They stopped at a sprawling hotel that looked like it had been plucked from a 1970s postcard—all beige concrete and dark-tinted glass windows. Inside, the lobby smelled of stale smoke and old carpet, and the lone receptionist looked at them with a hollow, disinterested gaze. The group was shown to a large dormitory room lined with bunk beds, a cramped space that felt more like a barracks than a place of rest. Elena chose a bottom bunk near the window, hoping to get some fresh air from the cool desert night. As she unpacked her meager belongings, she noticed Ingrid staring at her from across the room, her expression unreadable.
During dinner, Elena sat with a few other teachers, trying to make light conversation. But she kept glancing over to the corner table where Ingrid sat alone, picking at her food without eating. Suddenly, Ingrid looked up, met Elena’s eyes, and gave a slow, deliberate blink. Elena felt a chill run down her spine. When Elena excused herself to use the restroom, she passed by Ingrid’s table, and Ingrid grabbed her wrist with surprising strength. ‘You’ll hear it tonight,’ Ingrid whispered, her breath cold and smelling of cloves. ‘Don’t respond.’ Before Elena could ask what she meant, Ingrid released her and walked away, disappearing into the corridor.
Later, as the teachers prepared for bed, Ingrid approached Elena’s bunk, her face pale under the flickering fluorescent lights. ‘Would you mind if I took the top bunk?’ she asked, her voice soft and almost pleading. Elena, still unsettled but not wanting to seem rude, agreed. ‘Of course not. Go ahead.’ Ingrid climbed the ladder with an eerie, fluid grace, and Elena heard the springs of the top bunk protest as she settled in. The room fell into darkness as the other teachers turned off their lamps, and soon the only sounds were the hum of the air conditioner and the occasional cough.
In the middle of the night, Elena was jolted awake by a faint, scraping sound coming from the top bunk. It was rhythmic, like something dragging across the thin mattress. She lay still, heart pounding, listening. Then she heard Ingrid’s voice, but it was not Ingrid’s normal voice—it was low, guttural, and layered. ‘Don’t move, don’t breathe,’ it hissed. Elena squeezed her eyes shut, but she couldn’t block out the sound of Ingrid’s body shifting, the creak of the metal frame. Then, a terrible smell filled the room—rot and decay, thick as a cloth over her face. Elena wanted to scream, but her throat was frozen.
She felt a drop of liquid land on her forehead, cold and viscous. Panicking, she reached up to wipe it away, and her hand brushed against something thin and wet—like hair. But it was not hair; it was as fine as spider silk and clung to her fingers. She yanked her hand back and forced herself to stay still, praying for dawn. The scrapings continued for what felt like hours, punctuated by a low, wet sucking sound. Then, as suddenly as it began, it stopped. The room was silent again, except for the faint sound of breathing from the other bunks.
At the first light of dawn, Elena dared to look up. The top bunk was empty. The blanket was thrown aside, and the sheet was stained with a dark, reddish-brown patch. But there was no sign of Ingrid. Her suitcase was gone, and her pillow had been replaced by a small, ordinary cardboard box. Elena’s hand trembled as she pulled the box down. Inside, she found a single photograph of Ingrid, young and smiling, and a note written in a neat, careful hand: ‘I found this in the desert. Now you’re my witness. Tell no one, or it will follow you.’ The photo was dated twenty years ago.
Elena tried to ask the other teachers about Ingrid, but no one remembered her. The van’s manifest listed only eight teachers, and there had been nine in the van. When she tried to tell the school principal, he looked at her with pity and said, ‘You’ve been working too hard. Some women get confused in this heat.’ But Elena knew what she had seen, and what she had felt. That night, as she lay in her new apartment, she heard a faint scraping above her ceiling, and then a soft voice that seemed to come from behind the wall: ‘Don’t respond.’ She never spoke of it again, but she saved the photograph, and sometimes at night, she would stare at it, wondering what terrible thing Ingrid had dragged out of the desert, and whether it was now looking for her.