The Cardamom Haze

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"During my third year of engineering, I found myself in the misty highlands of Meghalaya, not the steamy backwaters of Kerala. My father, stepmother, and little sister were stationed in Dubai, so I was sent to stay with my stepmother’s aunt’s family in a small town called Shillong, perched on a ridge above a valley […]"

During my third year of engineering, I found myself in the misty highlands of Meghalaya, not the steamy backwaters of Kerala. My father, stepmother, and little sister were stationed in Dubai, so I was sent to stay with my stepmother’s aunt’s family in a small town called Shillong, perched on a ridge above a valley that was always cloaked in fog. Their home was a rambling wooden bungalow, a relic from the British era, surrounded by acres of cardamom, tea, and pine. The air was thick with the smell of damp earth and spices, and at night, the valley below glowed with scattered lights from villages that seemed impossibly distant.

The family was warm, but there was an undercurrent of unease. The aunt, a frail woman with eyes that seemed to look through you, would often pause mid-sentence and glance at the ceiling, as if listening for something. Her son, a man in his thirties named Ravi, was always cheerful, but his smile never quite reached his eyes. They had a servant, an old Khasi man name Kynpham, who rarely spoke but would sometimes squat by the fire and hum a song in a language I didn’t understand. I shrugged it off as the eccentricity of a remote community.

It was the smell that started it. On the third evening, as I was dozing in my room with a worn-out thriller novel, a sharp, cloying scent of burning candles drifted through the slatted window. It wasn’t the gentle aroma of a church; it was the sickly sweet smell of wax and smoke, as if a hundred candles were being extinguished at once. I sat up, my heart unnaturally loud. The room was plunged into a dim orange light, though the sun had not yet set. I stepped to the window and saw that the valley below was filled with a thin, writhing mist that seemed to pulse with a pale glow.

I made my way to the living room, where Ravi was sorting through a pile of dried cardamom pods. ‘Do you smell that?’ I asked. He looked up, his face blank. ‘Smell what?’ ‘Candles. Burning candles.’ He shook his head and returned to his work. But I knew I wasn’t imagining it. The smell grew stronger, clinging to my clothes, my hair, the back of my throat.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay in bed, listening to the wind whipping through the pines, when I heard a faint, rhythmic tapping from the wall behind my headboard. Tap, tap, tap. It was too steady to be a branch. I pressed my ear to the wood and heard a low, guttural whisper, an unfamiliar language that sounded like words being dragged over gravel. I pulled back, my skin crawling. The tapping continued for hours, then stopped at the exact moment the first rooster crowed.

I confronted Kynpham the next day. I found him feeding the chickens behind the house. ‘What is that tapping at night?’ I asked. He stared at me, his old eyes unreadable. ‘You hear it too? The candle ghosts.’ I pressed him for more, but he only shook his head and muttered, ‘They come for the ones who are not rooted. You must carry a piece of the earth before they find you.’ I thought he was being superstitious, but he pressed a small, smooth stone into my hand. ‘From the old stones under the bungalow. Keep it on you, boy.’

The next night, the tapping returned, but this time it was louder, more insistent. And then I heard the whispers clearly, as if they were right beside my ear. They were saying my name. My full name, which I never told anyone here. I jumped out of bed and stumbled to the window. Below, in the moonlit mist, I saw shapes moving—tall, skeletal figures that seemed to be made of smoke, their heads tilted as if listening. One of them turned to look directly at me. It had no face, but I felt its gaze penetrate the glass, and I understood with a chilling clarity that it was waiting for me to acknowledge it.

I ran to the aunt’s room. She was awake, sitting in a chair, staring at a lit candle on the windowsill. She didn’t seem surprised to see me. ‘You must leave at dawn,’ she said, her voice trembling. ‘The candle ghosts have been here since the British left. They were imprisoned in the old wells, but now the barrier is breaking. Ravi, my son, he tried to banish them, and look what happened.’ She pointed to a framed photograph on the wall. It was Ravi, but his eyes were black, hollow, and his mouth was stretched into an impossible grin. ‘The photograph wasn’t like that yesterday,’ she whispered. ‘He’s not my son anymore.’

Just then, the candle on the windowsill flickered and went out, and the glass of the window shattered inward. I felt a cold hand clamp onto my shoulder, and a voice, dripping with ancient malice, spoke into my ear in perfect English: ‘You have a stone. But it won’t save you.’ I turned and saw Ravi standing behind me, his eyes completely black, his face slack. He grinned, and the grin kept spreading until his cheeks split open, revealing a void of darkness. I screamed, but no sound came out.

I don’t remember how I got out, but I found myself running through the fog, the stone clutched in my hand. The shapes were everywhere, closing in. I stumbled into the old well house, a crumbling stone structure that Kynpham had said was sealed. The door was ajar. I ducked inside and slammed it shut, pressing my back against the cold, mossy stone. The whispers grew to a cacophony, and I felt the floor tremble. In the corner, I saw a ladder descending into a black pit. A faint, rhythmic tapping echoed from below.

I descended, clinging to the rusted rails. The air was thick with the smell of burning candles. At the bottom, I found a small, dusty altar, with an ancient carved idol and a circle of melted candle stubs. In the center was a brass vessel, wrapped in chains, with strange symbols etched on it. The tapping was coming from inside. I knew, with a sickening certainty, that this was the prison, and the ghosts were trying to break free. I remember Kynpham’s words: ‘Carry a piece of the earth.’ The stone in my hand was still warm. I pressed it to the vessel, and the tapping stopped. A deep, resonant silence followed.

I stayed there until dawn, not daring to move. When I finally emerged, the sun was rising, and the mist was lifting. The bungalow was silent. I found the aunt in her room, pale but alive, her eyes clear. Ravi was sitting at the kitchen table, staring at his hands, his gaze normal. He looked up at me and said, ‘I had the strangest dream.’ But his hands were shaking.

I left that afternoon, taking the stone with me. I never went back. But sometimes, when the wind is right, I can still smell burning candles, and I hear a faint tapping from the walls of my apartment. I’ve never thrown the stone away. I carry it always, a piece of that earth, a reminder that some prisons are best left sealed.

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