The Cane of the Vermillion Room

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"The house on Maplewood Lane wasn’t ours—not truly. It was a debt my grandmother had left unpaid, and my parents, eager for a fresh start, had accepted the keys with a shrug and a smile. The place was a tired, two-story Victorian farmhouse, its paint the color of dried blood, its porch sagging like an […]"

The house on Maplewood Lane wasn’t ours—not truly. It was a debt my grandmother had left unpaid, and my parents, eager for a fresh start, had accepted the keys with a shrug and a smile. The place was a tired, two-story Victorian farmhouse, its paint the color of dried blood, its porch sagging like an old hound’s jowls. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of mothballs and something older, something that clung to the faded floral wallpaper like a stain.

My twin brother, Edwin, and I were eight when we first noticed the room. It was at the end of the upstairs hallway, behind a door that was always ajar, just a crack. We were told it was a storage room, filled with my grandmother’s belongings. But the key would never turn in the lock, and the crack never widened, no matter how hard we pushed. One afternoon, while my parents were arguing downstairs about the failing well, Edwin swore he saw a hand—pale, with long fingers—curl around the doorframe and pull it shut. We never spoke of it, but we both started sleeping with our bedroom doors locked and a chair propped under the knobs.

Our grandmother, whom we called Marmee, had been a hard woman. She’d raised my mother and her two brothers in that house, and she’d been dead for a decade before we moved in. But sometimes, at night, I’d hear the creak of the rocking chair in the parlor, though nothing was there. And once, when I was alone in the kitchen, a cupboard door swung open on its own, and a teacup flew out, shattering against the wall. My parents blamed the wind, the faulty hinges, the shifting of the old house. But Edwin and I knew better. We’d found a photograph in the attic, hidden beneath a floorboard: a stern-looking man in a high-collared suit, holding a cane with a silver knob. On the back was written, ‘Sebastian Pemberton, 1887.’ The photographer’s stamp was from a studio that had been out of business for over a century.

When we were twelve, a summer of record heat set in. The fields around us turned brown, and the creek dried to a muddy trickle. It was during that terrible heat that Edwin began insisting on sleeping in my room. He’d lie on the floor, staring at the ceiling, saying nothing. But I’d hear him whisper in his sleep: ‘He’s counting the steps. He’s coming.’ I tried to ignore it, but one night, as I drifted off, I felt a cold pressure on my shoulder—a hand, rough and calloused, shaking me awake. I sat up, gasping, but there was no one there. In the mirror across the room, I saw a tall figure in a top hat, his face in shadow, his cane raised. When I blinked, it was gone. Edwin was awake too, sitting up, eyes wide. ‘You saw him,’ he said. ‘He’s real.’

We decided to confront the room. We found a crowbar in the barn and jimmied the lock one afternoon, when the heat was so thick it seemed to muffle every sound. The room was empty—not a piece of furniture, not a box, just a thin layer of dust and a single armchair in the corner, facing the window. The floorboards were scarred, as if something had been dragged across them many times. On the wall, someone had scratched a word: ‘LISTEN.’ We laughed nervously, but as we turned to leave, the door slammed shut behind us, and the lock clicked. We were trapped. The temperature dropped suddenly, and we could see our breath. Then we heard it: a slow, rhythmic thump, like a cane striking wood, coming from the hallway. The thumping grew louder, and the door rattled. Edwin and I pressed ourselves against the wall, holding each other. The thumping stopped right outside. A soft knock came, three times. Then a voice, dry and rasping, ‘I want my time back.’

We didn’t know what to say. I found my voice and shouted, ‘We don’t have your time! We don’t even know who you are!’ The voice laughed—a dry, hollow sound. ‘You are his kin. The sons of the son who stole my ledger. I have been waiting for him to return. But you will do.’ The door groaned, and I thought it would splinter. But then, just as suddenly, the voice faded, and the lock clicked open. We burst out, sobbing, and ran to our parents. But they said we’d fallen asleep in the field, that we’d been dreaming in the heat. They said the room was ‘unlocked’—they’d gone in that very morning and it was just dusty. They showed us: the armchair was gone, the scratches were gone, the wall was blank. We couldn’t prove a thing.

That night, I had a dream. I was in the Vermillion Room—that’s what we’d named it for the faded red wallpaper—and the man in the top hat was there, sitting in the armchair, facing away. I saw his cane resting against the chair, and on the floor, a worn leather journal. ‘You are a Pemberton,’ he said without turning. ‘You carry the debt. This house is not yours; it is the price of your family’s legacy. You will pay what your father omitted.’ I woke with a scream, and my pillow was wet with tears I didn’t remember crying.

The next morning, I found the journal in my dresser drawer. It was filled with names and dates—births, marriages, deaths—but the final entries were blank. The last name was my own, with a date: the winter solstice, three months away. Edwin saw it and turned pale. ‘We have to leave this house,’ he said. ‘We have to burn it down.’ But that night, as we packed our bags, our parents came into our room, their eyes blank, their movements stiff. They spoke in unison: ‘The house is our home. We are not leaving.’ We tried to snap them out of it, but they were like puppets, walking stiffly back to their bedroom.

Edwin and I decided to fight back. We found an old book on local history in the library, and hidden within its pages was an entry about a man named Sebastian Pemberton, a wealthy merchant who built the house in 1887 for his wife and children. He was known for his cruelty, particularly toward his servants and his eldest son. The son, Thomas, fled the house and never returned. Sebastian died in 1902, and the house passed to Thomas’s sister, who sold it to a family named Holloway. But the entry carried a footnote: ‘Pemberton’s ledger remains lost, rumored to be hidden within the house, containing a debt of souls.’ We knew then that the ledger must be the journal, and that Sebastian wanted it back to claim his due.

We decided to destroy the ledger. That evening, as the sunset bled into the fields, we took the journal to the backyard and built a bonfire. As the flames touched the leather, a scream rose from the chimney—not a gust, but a human wail—and the windows of the Vermillion Room shattered. The door to the house burst open, and our parents stumbled out, blinking, as if waking from a trance. They looked at us, then at the fire, and their faces filled with horror. ‘What have you done?’ my mother asked. ‘We freed you,’ I said. But she shook her head. ‘He’s bound to the ledger. You’ve destroyed his anchor, but now his spirit is loose—he will wander, and he will follow you.’

We left that night. We drove to the city and stayed with our aunt, but the fear followed. I saw him in the corner of my eye at school, waiting at the bus stop, watching from the edge of the playground. Edwin began to hear the tapping of the cane at night, even in our new apartment, and he’d wake screaming, pointing at the window. One night, I looked in the mirror and saw my own reflection, but it was older, gaunt, with a top hat perched on my head. I screamed, and it vanished.

We are now in our twenties, and we have moved across the country, changed our names, and covered our mirrors with sheets. But last night, Edwin called me, his voice thin and shaking. He said he found a photograph in his new house—an old tintype of a man in a top hat, holding a cane. On the back was written, ‘To my son, who will come home.’ He said the man in the photograph was smiling. Then the line went dead.

I am writing this in a motel room, the door locked, the blinds drawn, a chair propped under the knob. But I can hear it: three soft knocks on the door, and the dry rasping voice, ‘I want the time you owe me.’ I have no ledger to burn. I have no house to flee. I am the last debt, and I fear the veranda of that old Victorian will be the place where I finally pay.

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