The Candy Man Cometh

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"I never believed in ghosts, not really. Not until the autumn I spent at my cousin’s farmhouse, buried in the fog of the Tennessee hills. My cousin Lena had invited me for a long weekend, hoping to shake off the city grime. Her daughter, Sadie, was four, with wide gray eyes that seemed to hold […]"

I never believed in ghosts, not really. Not until the autumn I spent at my cousin’s farmhouse, buried in the fog of the Tennessee hills. My cousin Lena had invited me for a long weekend, hoping to shake off the city grime. Her daughter, Sadie, was four, with wide gray eyes that seemed to hold more than a child’s share of secrets.

The first oddity came at dinner. Lena’s phone, a new model, died at exactly ninety percent. She cursed, plugged it in, and it flickered back to life. Then my own phone did the same. We laughed it off, blaming a faulty outlet. But then the house groaned, a low, deep thud from the walls, as if something heavy had fallen. The front door, which we’d locked, creaked open on its own, letting in a swirl of cold air that smelled of damp earth and something sweet, like burnt sugar.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I heard whispers, two distinct voices, one guttural and old, the other light and girlish. I crept to Sadie’s room. She was sitting up in bed, staring at the corner, talking softly. ‘No, Mary, he’s mean. Don’t touch him,’ she said. I asked who she was talking to, and she pointed to the shadows. ‘Mary,’ she said, ‘and the Chocolate Man. They live in the walls.’

Over the next days, Sadie told us more. The Chocolate Man was tall, as tall as me—I’m five ten—and he wore a broad-brimmed hat that hid his face, but she said he had a shiny smile like dripping chocolate. He’d give her candies, but only if she promised to come with him and leave her family. He didn’t like her mama or me, she said, because we were in his house. Mary was a lady in a long dress who never spoke, just watched. Lena found Sadie’s cheeks stained with chocolate, though we never bought any.

One evening, the internet died, even though the router was untouched. The power flickered, and a phone call came from the house’s old intercom, crackling with static and a whispered ‘Come out to play.’ I searched every room, found nothing. Sadie began to cry, clutching a candy bar we’d never seen, with a wrapper so old it crumbled. ‘He’s angry,’ she sobbed. ‘He says you’re taking his home.’

I decided to dig into the house’s history. An elderly neighbor told us the farmhouse was built over an old orphanage that burned down in the 1920s. A matron named Mary had died in the fire, and a handyman, a tall man with a craving for sweets, was suspected of starting it. Children had vanished before the fire, some found wandering in woods with chocolate in their mouths.

That night, I set up a hidden camera in Sadie’s room. On the footage, at 3 a.m., the closet door swung open. A figure stepped out—tall, thin, with a hat obscuring its face. It moved to Sadie’s bed, leaned over, and a voice like a rusted gate whispered, ‘Time to go, little one.’ Then the girl beside Sadie—Mary, pale and translucent—shook her head and pointed at me. The figure turned, and I swear it looked through the lens straight into my soul.

I woke Lena, and we decided to leave at first light. But as we packed, Sadie sat in the living room, staring at the wall. She pointed. ‘He said he’ll follow us. He said he’ll always find me, because I’m his now.’ We drove off as the sun rose, but in the rearview mirror, I saw a tall silhouette by the mailbox, holding something that glinted like a chocolate wrapper. And on the back seat, a single piece of candy—black as coal—with a note in a child’s handwriting: ‘See you soon.’

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