The Candle That Wouldn’t Light

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"The storm had knocked out the power across the whole block, and my house felt like a tomb. I fumbled through the dark to my room, where a single candle sat on my dresser, a faint hope against the suffocating blackness. But I had no matches, no lighter—nothing. My mother’s trick was to light long […]"

The storm had knocked out the power across the whole block, and my house felt like a tomb. I fumbled through the dark to my room, where a single candle sat on my dresser, a faint hope against the suffocating blackness. But I had no matches, no lighter—nothing. My mother’s trick was to light long wooden sticks from the gas stove, but our stove was a hybrid that needed electricity for the ignition, and that was dead too.

I texted my friend Jenna, who was staying with our neighbor, Mrs. Hartley. I told my dad I’d just go over to light my candle and come right back. The rain hammered the roof as I ran across the slick lawn, the wind howling like a hungry thing. Mrs. Hartley’s house was a warm glow in the storm, candlelight flickering behind the windows.

Inside, Jenna and Mrs. Hartley were chatting on the couch, the air thick with the smell of melting wax and old wood. They welcomed me, and soon we were laughing, sharing a carton of chocolate chip ice cream. The storm raged outside, but inside it felt safe, like a bubble. Mrs. Hartley, an elderly woman with kind eyes, finally yawned and said she was going to bed. She shuffled down the hall to her room at the end, closing the door softly.

Jenna and I continued talking, our voices low. Then I noticed the candle I’d brought—it was still unlit. I placed it on the coffee table, intending to light it from one of Mrs. Hartley’s candles, but I got caught up in a story Jenna was telling. The ice cream was almost gone, and the room had grown darker, the candles burning low. I reached for my candle, but it was gone. I asked Jenna if she’d moved it. She said no, and we both looked around the table, the floor, the chairs. Nothing.

A cold draft swept through the room, and I shivered. Jenna’s face went pale. ‘Did you hear that?’ she whispered. I listened, but only the storm replied. Then, from the end of the hall, we heard a creak—a door opening slowly. Mrs. Hartley’s door. We exchanged a glance, and Jenna called out, ‘Mrs. Hartley? Is everything okay?’ No answer. The silence stretched, and then we heard footsteps, slow and deliberate, coming down the hall.

But they didn’t stop at the living room. They passed by the doorway, heading toward the kitchen. I felt a sudden urge to follow, to see what was happening. Jenna gripped my arm, her nails digging in. ‘Don’t,’ she hissed. But I was already moving, drawn by a strange curiosity. I peeked around the corner into the kitchen. The moonlight through the window revealed the stove, cold and dark. And there, on the counter, was my candle, unlit, next to a long wooden stick. As I watched, the stick lifted into the air, dipped toward the stove as if to light it—but there was no flame. Then it turned, pointing at me.

I backed away, my heart pounding. The stick dropped to the floor with a clatter. Jenna was behind me, her face ashen. ‘We need to leave,’ she said. We grabbed our things and rushed to the front door, but it wouldn’t budge. We pulled and pushed, but it was as if something held it shut from the outside. Then the lights—all the candles in the room—went out at once, plunging us into absolute darkness. A voice, not quite human, whispered from the kitchen: ‘You didn’t light it.’

We huddled together, trembling. The voice came again, closer now: ‘You didn’t light it.’ Then I heard Mrs. Hartley’s voice, but distorted, layered with another: ‘It needs to be lit.’ We stumbled for the back door, and it opened easily, spilling us into the storm. We ran to my house, soaked and terrified. My dad asked where my candle was. I looked at my empty hands and said nothing. For weeks, I couldn’t sleep. Every time the power flickered, I would see that stick lifting, pointing at me, and hear those words. I never did light that candle. It wasn’t mine anymore.

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