The Burnt Ledger

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"The idea of a haunted hotel had thrilled me ever since I booked our stay at the Monro Estate, a sprawling colonial mansion perched on the misty slopes of Coonoor. The place had a grim history: in 1962, a catastrophic fire had gutted the main wing, killing a dozen guests and staff. The estate was […]"

The idea of a haunted hotel had thrilled me ever since I booked our stay at the Monro Estate, a sprawling colonial mansion perched on the misty slopes of Coonoor. The place had a grim history: in 1962, a catastrophic fire had gutted the main wing, killing a dozen guests and staff. The estate was rebuilt, but the charred scars were still visible in the dark wooden beams and the smell of smoke that lingered in certain corridors. I was obsessed with the prospect of seeing something supernatural, and my husband, Rohan, and our twelve-year-old daughter, Meera, were less than enthusiastic.

We arrived on a damp afternoon, the air thick with the scent of wet earth and eucalyptus. The manor stood like a grand old lady, her white pillars stained with soot, her windows reflecting the grey sky. The caretaker, an elderly man named Mr. Pinto, handed us a heavy brass key and told us to avoid the east wing, which was still under renovation. His eyes, hollow and tired, fixed on me as he warned, ‘The fire took more than wood and brick. Some things never leave.’ I shivered with excitement, not fear.

Our suite was in the west wing, furnished with antique furniture and sepia photographs. The first night was uneventful. We dined in a hall lit by candelabras, and the only disturbance was the odd scuttling of rodents in the walls. Meera complained of a draft in her room, but I dismissed it. I was beginning to think my ghost hunt would fail, just like the trip to Kasauli two years ago that had left me sorely disappointed.

On the second morning, I discovered a small, charred book in the drawer of the writing desk. It was a ledger, its pages stuck together, but some words were legible. The entries were dated December 12, 1962, the night of the fire. The last line read, ‘All guests accounted for, but the boy is still missing. God help us if he returns.’ I felt a chill that had nothing to do with the mountain cold. I tucked the book into my bag, intending to investigate further.

That night, Meera woke up screaming. She said she saw a boy standing at the foot of her bed, his clothes smoking, his skin peeling like burnt paper. He pointed a shaking finger at the window and whispered, ‘The pigeons are gone.’ I tried to comfort her, but she was inconsolable. Rohan wanted to leave, but I convinced him to stay one more night, promising that if anything else happened, we’d go.

On our last full day, I explored the hotel’s library, looking for records of the fire. I found an old newspaper clipping from 1963: a follow-up story about an unidentified child’s remains found in the rubble. The article mentioned that the child’s leg was caught under a fallen beam, and that a maid had reported seeing a boy throw a ball at a window just before the fire broke out, but no one had ever found the ball. I felt a sudden unease, as if I was being watched.

That evening, I decided to visit the east wing despite the warning. The corridor was blocked by a wooden barrier, but I slipped through a gap. The floorboards creaked, and the air was heavy with the smell of smoke. At the end of the hall, I found a burnt room, its walls blackened. In the corner, under a collapsed wardrobe, I saw a small, rusted ball. Without thinking, I reached out and picked it up. The moment my fingers touched it, the temperature plummeted, and I heard a child’s voice behind me: ‘You found it. Now you have to play.’

I spun around, but there was no one. The ball felt warm in my hand, pulsing like a heartbeat. I ran back to our suite, heart pounding. I showed the ball to Rohan, who instantly went pale. ‘Where did you get that?’ he demanded. ‘It’s from the fire,’ I said. He told me that earlier, while I was out, Meera had said the same words as in my vision: ‘The pigeons are gone.’ She then listed a series of numbers, which Rohan thought was nonsense but now realized were the coordinates to the east wing.

We decided to leave first thing in the morning, but Meera refused to sleep. She kept staring at the door, muttering, ‘He’s waiting by the wardrobe.’ I couldn’t shake the feeling that we were being toyed with. At midnight, the power went out. We heard footsteps in the hallway, slow and dragging. Then a voice, so faint it might have been the wind, but it was clear: ‘Come play.’

I couldn’t bear it anymore. I grabbed the ledger and the ball and marched back to the east wing, determined to end this. The boy appeared in the corridor, a small silhouette with glowing eyes. He pointed to the wardrobe. ‘Open it,’ he said. I did, and inside was a child’s skeleton, missing its left leg. I realized then: the boy had been trapped, and we had unknowingly freed him. But his vengeance was not on us; it was on the hotel that had forgotten him.

The next morning, the hotel was quiet. The ball was gone from my hand, and the ledger had turned to ash in my bag. But as we drove away, I saw in the rearview mirror the boy standing on the veranda, watching, and he smiled. I knew then that I had gotten my paranormal experience, but it was one I would never forget, and one that would haunt me as much as the boy haunting the Monro Estate.

Back home, I tried to shake the memory, but every now and then, I hear a faint thud, like a ball hitting a wall, and I see the boy’s face in the darkness behind my closed eyes. I haven’t told anyone the full story, but I keep the charred ledger, a constant reminder that some fires never truly go out.

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