The Billow at Dusk

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"The air in the apartment felt thick, stale, like the breath of something that had been holding it for years. Our family had rented the place for a week, a corner suite in an old hotel that had seen better decades, its name faded from the lintel. We were on the twelfth floor of the […]"

The air in the apartment felt thick, stale, like the breath of something that had been holding it for years. Our family had rented the place for a week, a corner suite in an old hotel that had seen better decades, its name faded from the lintel. We were on the twelfth floor of the Kinta View, a relic from the time of rubber barons and tea dances, now standing alone on the outskirts of a bustling city. The windows were floor-to-ceiling, the kind that made you feel like you were floating over the treeline, but they were sealed shut, barely able to crack open, safety permits be damned.

It was our second night. The air conditioner unit rattled like a dying insect, so we turned it off, letting the night heat settle in. My brother, Liam, lay sprawled on the carpet, his eyes glued to the television. Our mother was in the kitchen, humming a tune she believed in. I sat by the window, my back against the cool glass, the heavy curtain half-drawn beside me. The room was dim, only the flickering screen throwing light across the walls.

Then the curtain moved. It wasn’t a violent jerk, just a lazy billow, as if a lazy breeze had found its way in. But the window was shut, the latch secured, the glass unbroken. And the door to the balcony, the only other opening, was sealed with a chain and a deadbolt. My sister, Aisha, who had been sitting across the room, looked up. She frowned, her eyes tracking the curtain as it settled back into stillness.

‘Did you feel that?’ she asked, her voice low, as if she didn’t want to alarm anyone. I shook my head, but I had felt it. A cold, needle-thin draft that kissed my spine. ‘Maybe the AC is on the fritz,’ I offered, but we both knew that was a lie. The unit was off.

The next morning, the curtain was at the window, hanging limp, but the room felt colder. We shrugged it off, blamed the altitude, the thin walls. But that evening, as the sun bled into the horizon, painting the city in shades of rust, the curtain moved again. This time, it wasn’t a gentle billow. It snapped, as if a hand had yanked the fabric, and then it fell still, the fabric rippling for a moment before quieting.

Aisha stood up, her face pale. ‘There’s something in this room,’ she said. Our mother dismissed her, said it was a draft from the hallway, but the door was shut. I saw the hair on Aisha’s arms stand up. She walked to the window, placed her palm flat against the glass. ‘It’s cold,’ she whispered. ‘The glass is cold.’

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay in my bed, watching the curtain, waiting. The clock on the nightstand said 3:03 AM. The room was silent, save for the low hum of the building’s foundation. Then the curtain lifted, not a billow this time, but a slow rise, as if something was pressing against it from the other side. I saw a shape, a dark smear against the dim light, but it was gone in an instant.

The next day, we decided to leave. Our father, who had been quiet throughout, suddenly woke with a start, gasping for air. He said he had dreamed of a figure standing at the foot of his bed, a figure with a slack jaw and hollow eyes, whispering about the debts of the heart. We packed in haste, not bothering to check the drawers for forgotten items. As we reached the door, the curtains in the room all billowed at once, a synchronized shudder, even though the windows remained shut.

We took the elevator in silence. The bellhop, an old man with a face like crumpled paper, asked if we had enjoyed our stay. I forced a smile, but Aisha grabbed my arm. ‘Look,’ she said, pointing at the lobby mirror. In it, I saw the reflection of our room, the curtains billowing wildly, even though we were a floor away. And behind the curtains, I could have sworn I saw a face, pressed against the glass, a grin that was too wide.

The elevator doors slid shut. We never spoke of it again. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I hear the soft whisper of fabric, and I know it’s not the wind.

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