The Bent Man in the Blackthorns

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"I’ve lived in Marrowby all my life, a village so small that the post office doubles as the pub and everyone knows everyone’s business. It sits in a fold of the downs, south of the chalk hills, where the fields are patchworks of green and brown and the lanes are narrow, high-banked tunnels of hawthorn […]"

I’ve lived in Marrowby all my life, a village so small that the post office doubles as the pub and everyone knows everyone’s business. It sits in a fold of the downs, south of the chalk hills, where the fields are patchworks of green and brown and the lanes are narrow, high-banked tunnels of hawthorn and blackthorn. My friend Ruth and I, we were restless that winter, the kind of restless that comes from too many nights in the same room, the same talk, the same smoke. So on a grey Tuesday afternoon, with the light already thin at three o’clock, we decided to walk the old drovers’ road to the Iron Age fort on the hill. It’s a mile of grass-grown track between ancient banks, lined with gnarled trees that lean in like old men sharing secrets. We’d been there a hundred times, but never in the low, bruised light of a December day.

We climbed the hill, the wind sharp on our cheeks, and found our usual spot: a bare patch of earth where the dew pond reflects the sky, and the earthworks rise like low walls. Ruth rolled a cigarette, and we sat on the cold ground, looking out over the grey-green slopes, the distant spinneys, the single farm track winding back to the road. The stream below had frozen in patches, and the reeds were stiff and brown. It was beautiful, in a bleak way, and for a while we just smoked in silence. Then I saw him.

He was down in the spinney to our left, where the blackthorns grow thick and twisted. He was holding onto a tree, his body swaying back and forth with the wind, but not like the trees did. The trees moved in long, smooth arcs; he moved in short, jerky, angled motions, as if his joints didn’t bend properly. He was tall, too tall, and thin, and he wore a long coat that hung straight, almost like a shroud. I didn’t say anything to Ruth. I thought it was just a trick of the light, a shadow, a bit of old fencing. But I couldn’t look away. He kept swaying, and his head turned slowly towards me, but his face was in shadow under a wide-brimmed hat.

I stubbed out my cigarette and stood up, trying to seem casual. ‘Let’s walk back,’ I said. Ruth looked at me, surprised. ‘It’s early yet,’ she said. ‘I’m cold,’ I said, and started down the slope. Ruth shrugged and followed. As we walked, I glanced back once. The figure was no longer swaying. He was standing perfectly still, one hand still on the tree, but his head was following us. I felt a cold knot in my stomach. I didn’t tell Ruth what I saw, because I thought I had imagined it, and I didn’t want to sound like a fool.

We didn’t go back to the fort for a week. But the image stayed with me, the way he moved, the way he watched. Ruth wanted to go again, to prove nothing was there. I agreed, but I made sure we went in the middle of the day, when the sun was high and the shadows short. We walked the same route, but when we reached the top, the spinney was empty. I laughed, made a joke about seeing a scarecrow. But then I saw the tree where he had been. The bark was worn thin, as if something had been rubbing against it for a long time. And at the base, there was a small, neat pile of stones, like a cairn. I didn’t touch it. I just looked at it, and then I looked at Ruth, and I saw she was looking at it too. ‘Did you see him?’ she asked. I nodded. ‘Who was he?’ she said. I didn’t know.

Over the next weeks, I saw him again, three times. Once from the lane, watching from the treeline. Once from my bedroom window, a shape in the field beyond the garden, too far to be sure. And once, at dusk, when I was walking the dog, I saw him on the path ahead of me, just standing there, blocking my way. He was closer this time, close enough that I could see his face: it was white, almost translucent, and his eyes were dark holes. He had no mouth, just a smooth, blank patch. I froze, and the dog growled and then whimpered. After a long moment, he turned and walked into the blackthorns, and was gone. I ran back home, my heart pounding, and I didn’t go out after dark for a month.

I started asking around the village, careful, casual questions. Old Mrs. Whitlow, who had lived here all her life, told me that the old drovers’ road led to the fort, which was said to be a place where Roman soldiers buried their dead. But she also told me about a man, ‘the Bent Man’, who in the old days used to come down from the hills and take sheep, and sometimes children. They said he was the ghost of a shepherd who had hanged himself in the blackthorns, and his body had swung in the wind so long that it twisted his bones. She said he still walked the hills, looking for those who strayed too far from the village.

I should have left it there. But I was curious, and I was angry, and I felt like he was watching me, waiting. So I decided to go back to the fort, alone, one last time, to see if I could understand. It was a clear, cold evening, just after the shortest day. I took a torch and a walking stick. The lane was dark, the trees black and still. When I reached the fort, the sky was a deep purple, and the first stars were out. I walked to the spinney. The tree with the worn bark was there, and the pile of stones. I knelt down and looked at them. They were not natural; they were placed in a spiral, and in the centre was a small, dark stone, smooth as glass. I picked it up. It was cold, colder than the air, and it hummed faintly, like a plucked string.

I heard a sound behind me. I turned, and he was there, not ten feet away. He stood between me and the path, swaying slightly, his head tilted. I could see his face clearly now: it was gray, like old bone, and his eyes were not holes but lenses, like the eyes of a dead fish, reflecting the last light. I tried to speak, but my voice was gone. He raised a hand, long and thin, and pointed at me. And then he opened his mouth. There was no mouth, but a crack appeared, and from it came a sound, not a voice but a dry rustling, like wind through dead leaves. I dropped the stone and ran. I ran down the hill, through the lane, not stopping until I burst into my kitchen, slamming and locking the door behind me.

I haven’t been back to the fort since. But I still see him sometimes, from my window, standing in the field at the edge of the garden, always at dusk, always watching. The stone I picked up, I threw it into the stream, but the next morning it was on my doorstep. I’ve tried to get rid of it, but it always comes back. I keep it in a drawer now, wrapped in cloth. And at night, I hear it humming, and I know that he is waiting for me to come back, to finish what I started. The village folk say that the Bent Man takes those who stay too long on the hills, and I fear I have stayed too long. But it doesn’t matter. He’s in my mind now, and he won’t leave. Maybe I’m the new Bent Man, waiting for someone else to come and see me in the blackthorns. And maybe, one day, I’ll be the one swaying in the wind, and someone will think I’m just a shadow, and not know that I was once a man who saw too much and walked too close to the edge of the old world.

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