The Bedroom’s Slow Invitation

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"In the summer of my eleventh year, my family gathered in the living room of our rented duplex on Spruce Street. The windows were open to the thick, humid air, and the ceiling fan struggled against the heat. I was the youngest, and I loved the spotlight. I stood on the braided rug in front […]"

In the summer of my eleventh year, my family gathered in the living room of our rented duplex on Spruce Street. The windows were open to the thick, humid air, and the ceiling fan struggled against the heat. I was the youngest, and I loved the spotlight. I stood on the braided rug in front of the couch, waving my arms as I recounted a silly episode from a cartoon I’d seen that afternoon. My mother laughed, my older brother rolled his eyes, and my sister nudged him to be quiet. The house was small, and from where I stood, the hallway leading to the bedrooms stretched out behind the couch. The door to my parents’ room was ajar, but the light inside was off, a dark rectangle against the dimly lit hall.

I was mid-sentence when something in that darkness caught my eye. A girl, maybe a little older than me, stood just inside the doorway. She wore a pale yellow sundress that seemed to glow faintly, as if lit by moonlight. She was pacing in a slow, deliberate circle, her bare feet making no sound on the carpet. Her head was down, but she kept glancing up at me, her eyes wide and pleading. She lifted her arm and motioned for me to come, a slow, beckoning wave. I paused, but the feeling that washed over me was not fear. It was a strange curiosity, a pull that was almost comforting. I turned back to my family, who hadn’t noticed my distraction, and continued my story with a laugh.

The girl would sigh, a sound that barely reached my ears, and continue her pacing. Every few steps, she’d stop, look at me with an expression of deep longing, and wave again. I ignored her, caught up in the warmth of the room, the laughter of my family, the buzz of the old television. But each time I looked her way, she was there, a quiet, persistent presence. Her movements were hypnotic, and I found myself checking on her more often, as if making sure she was still there.

At one point, my mother got up to get a drink from the kitchen. As she passed the hallway, she glanced down it, but showed no sign of seeing the girl. She returned with a glass of iced tea and sat back down. The girl continued her routine, her motioning becoming more urgent. I felt a tug at my sleeve, and I looked up to see my sister grinning at me. ‘Are you even listening?’ she asked. I nodded, but my gaze drifted back to the doorway. The girl had stopped pacing. She stood perfectly still, her arm outstretched, her finger pointing directly at me. Her lips moved, forming silent words I couldn’t understand.

Then, without warning, she began to walk toward me. Not floating, not gliding, but taking slow, deliberate steps, as if wading through water. Her feet left faint, wet marks on the carpet, marks that darkened and then vanished. My heart began to pound, but I still felt no fear, only an overwhelming sense of duty, as if I had been awaiting this call my whole life. The room around us seemed to dim, the voices of my family fading into a distant murmur. The girl stopped in front of me, then reached out her hand. Her fingers were cold, and when they touched mine, a jolt ran up my arm. She smiled, a slow, wide smile that did not reach her eyes, and then she turned and began to walk back toward the bedroom, still holding my hand.

I looked back at my family, but they were frozen, like statues, their laughter stuck in their throats. I knew, with a certainty that pierced the dream, that if I went with her, I would never return. But I also knew, with equal certainty, that I was meant to. I stepped forward, and the hallway seemed to stretch, the walls closing in. The girl’s hand was firm, and I could feel the pulse of something ancient in her grip. As we reached the doorway, I looked inside the room. It was not my parents’ room anymore. It was a vast, dark space, filled with the sound of slow, rhythmic breathing, and the distant drip of water. The girl turned to me, her face now shifting, the features melting into something older, something not quite human. She opened her mouth, and a voice that echoed like many spoke at once, said, ‘You took your time.’

I woke up in a cold sweat, my pajamas clinging to my skin. The room was dark, and I could hear the hum of the refrigerator from the kitchen. I lay still, my heart racing, trying to convince myself it was just a dream. But then I heard it, a faint sound from the hallway, the soft pad of bare feet on carpet, and the squeak of a door slowly closing. I never told anyone about the dream, but from that night on, I always kept my bedroom door locked, and I never looked down the hallway without turning on every light. And sometimes, in the dead of night, I still feel a cold hand on my wrist, and I hear a voice whispering, ‘You took your time.’ But I refuse to open my eyes.

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