The Ashfall Visitors

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"That summer, the heat in our quiet province of Pampanga felt like a wet blanket smothering the whole town. I was sixteen, and my three cousins from Cebu City had come to stay with us for their vacation. The nights were the worst; the air was so thick you could chew it, and sleep was […]"

That summer, the heat in our quiet province of Pampanga felt like a wet blanket smothering the whole town. I was sixteen, and my three cousins from Cebu City had come to stay with us for their vacation. The nights were the worst; the air was so thick you could chew it, and sleep was a distant, teasing possibility. We’d lie on the bamboo mats, sweat soaking through our shirts, listening to the geckos click their dry tongues against the walls.

One night, around ten, after tossing and turning for what felt like hours, my cousin Rina sat up and said, ‘I can’t take this anymore. Let’s go get some balut.’ Her voice was a lifeline. We all agreed. Anything to escape the suffocating stillness. We took my uncle’s rusty, old jeep, the one with the cracked windshield and the engine that coughed like a smoker, and drove the dusty five kilometers to the town proper. The market was still alive, a few vendors hawking their goods under fluorescent lights that buzzed like trapped flies. We bought a dozen balut, warm and slightly damp in their paper bags, and started our journey back home.

The road home was a narrow strip of asphalt cutting through dense, sleeping coconut groves. The jeep’s headlights carved a weak cone of light into the darkness. I was in the passenger seat, my cousin Marco driving, when I saw them. It was a woman, her form blurry and indistinct at first, standing at the edge of the road under a dying acacia tree. She was holding an infant wrapped in a stained, faded blanket, and a small child, maybe three or four, clung to the folds of her long, gray dress. The woman raised her arm, a slow, languid motion, signaling for a ride.

My heart stumbled. It was late, and the road was lonely. We were supposed to be heading back, and she was asking for the opposite direction. I glanced at Rina and my other cousin, Jun, in the back seat. They had seen her too. Marco slowed down, squinting through the windshield. ‘She wants a ride to town,’ he muttered, his brow furrowed. ‘But we’re going home.’ There was a collective, unspoken unease. The baby hadn’t moved, not a tiny flinch. The child was stock-still, a tiny statue.

As we got closer, something else caught my attention. The woman’s head was bowed, her neck craned downward as if she were intensely studying the ground at her feet. The child, too, was hunched over, his face invisible, just a dark oval. It was a pose of profound submission, or perhaps something more disturbing. Marco pressed the accelerator, and the jeep surged forward, passing them. We all turned to look back, and that’s when I saw it. The woman’s head was still bowed, but her neck twisted at an unnatural angle. It wasn’t a gentle dip; it was a rigid, almost broken bend, as if her neck was made of cracking rubber. And the child, still holding the dress, was also twisted, his head resting almost on his shoulder. They both stood there, motionless, watching us leave with those hidden faces.

A cold dread coiled in my stomach. No one spoke. The balut in the bag suddenly felt heavy and oppressive. We drove on, the silence broken only by the engine’s rumble and the crunch of gravel under tires.

Finally, Rina whispered, ‘Did you see that? Their heads…’

‘I’m sure it’s just the light,’ Jun said, but his voice was thin, unconvinced.

We tried to laugh it off, to pretend we hadn’t seen what we saw. But the image was burned into our minds. We were about a kilometer from our house when the jeep sputtered and died. The headlights flickered out, plunging us into absolute blackness. The only sound was the chirping of crickets and a low, whispering wind that seemed to come from nowhere.

‘What the hell?’ Marco turned the key again and again, but the engine just clicked. We were stranded. The coconut trees loomed like silent giants on either side, and the road stretched endlessly ahead.

‘We can walk,’ I said, but no one moved. The thought of stepping out into that darkness was terrifying.

Then, a faint scraping sound reached my ears. It was like something being dragged across the asphalt. I strained my eyes, and in the dim starlight, I saw a shape emerging from the gloom. It was the woman, still carrying the infant, the child still clinging to her dress. They were walking toward us, but their movements were jerky, unnatural, like marionettes with tangled strings. And their heads were still tilted down, as if the weight of an invisible burden was too much to bear.

A low, guttural sound rose from the child, not a cry, but a dry, rattling wheeze. The woman began to hum, a tuneless, off-key melody that spoke of something ancient and hungry. My blood ran cold. I saw the infant’s blanket stir, and a tiny, gray hand, impossibly thin, reached out, the fingers twitching in our direction.

‘Get in the jeep!’ I yelled. We scrambled, slamming the doors shut. The windows were open, but we were too terrified to roll them up. The woman and the child were almost upon us, their bodies emanating a sickly, damp cold that seeped through my skin.

The child’s head slowly lifted. Its face was a gray, crumpled thing, like a used paper bag, with deep, empty sockets where eyes should have been. Its mouth opened, a chasm of blackness, and a thin, reedy voice said, ‘We only wanted to go home.’

Then the woman lifted her head. But it wasn’t a head anymore. It was a mass of writhing earth, crawling with ants and beetles, with a hollow space where a face should have been, and from that space, a swarm of flies burst out, covering the windshield, the hood, everything. The infant in her arms began to cry, but it sounded like a lamb being slaughtered.

I squeezed my eyes shut, praying. I think I blacked out for a moment. When I opened my eyes, the jeep was silent, the headlights were on, and the engine was idling. The woman and the children were gone. The road was empty, dust motes dancing in the light beams. The balut was on the floor, scattered, but the bag was dry and warm.

We never spoke about it again. We drove home in silence, and later, when we finally went to bed, we all had nightmares. But the strangest part came the next morning. My uncle, who was fixing the jeep later that day, found something wedged under the driver’s seat. It was a small, matted lock of gray hair, tied with a piece of red thread, and a tiny, crumpled photograph of a woman and two children, their faces faded beyond recognition. My uncle, a practical man, just shrugged and tossed it in the trash. But I couldn’t shake the feeling that the ashfall from the nearby volcano had brought something else down with it that summer, and we had merely been a blip on its path home.

That lock of hair, the photograph, they haunted me. But they also became my proof, my secret evidence of the ashfall visitors. A year later, my cousin Rina, back in the city, called me. In a hushed, terrified voice, she told me she had found the same photograph, tucked inside a book in her apartment, a book she’d bought months ago. And in the photograph, the woman’s head was slightly tilted, as if looking at the camera. And the child, the small one, was grinning, his teeth black and needle-sharp. That was the last time any of us ever mentioned the night of the balut.

Now, every time the summer heat becomes unbearable, every time I see a stray dog with its head bowed, I wonder if they’re still out there, waiting by the roadside, waiting for someone to offer them a ride. And I pray they never ask me again. The road home is long, but it’s not safe. The ashfall visitors, as I call them, they’re always looking for a way back, and they always find their way to the ones who look too long, who notice the heads bowed to the ground. So, if you ever see a woman with an infant and a child on a lonely road, waving at you, just keep driving. And don’t look back. And for heaven’s sake, don’t stop.

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